FF -- hmm -- Margerita style

Date: 05/27/2000
From: Tigs


New Beginnings
His blood is on my hands and agony fills my heart
Death courted him for far too long before claiming
Her reward, she let him warn us of our peril
Who else will die before this day is over?

Faces I never got to know rest in a shared grave
My soul mate is the only walking casualty
In his head there rests the threat of more
Than an easy ride to Death's halls.

She'll never replace the dearly departed
But they swear she can hold together
His actions or mind; I don't know how
To erase the past for a new beginning.

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On the new world the colonists adjust to life as Quinn and company rebuild the timer with Jensen's spare parts. Arturo discovers that the Kromaggs have left behind a small vanguard. He dies while warning the colonists. The colonists destroy Kromags after finding out Quinn has a tracking device inside him. Margeret is drafted to join the sliders in order to prevent Quinn from betraying Wade and Remmy.
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Thanks for the love DQ, Stoke, and delly. Kitten--it was the wind <mock serious face>

Hope ya'll enjoy this decent into madness. For I am still merry in the momentary thrill of mind blindness.

ktf
Tigs


Guess what...

Date: 05/27/2000
From: Slider_Sarah


this is wonderful as always?

Wind? What wind?

kitten/brat.

You mean...

Date: 05/27/2000
From: Stoker_chick

...the same gust of wind that just blew anyone who's been reading these away? J/k, I know that's corny. But still, I hate giving compliments because they're usually not nearly as meaningful as they deserve to be, but this was wonderful. I hope your writers block subsides, and that whatever else that is bothering you to create it recedes.

As for what you said earlier, that fact that someone cares is enough to make me feel a little better, thanks, but I don't think there's anything anyone else can do.

Peace out,

Stoker

Yea!

Date: 05/27/2000
From: Doctor_Quinn


I dunno how you come up with this stuff! Maybe I'm better off reading it, and obviously enjoying it!
Keep up the good work!


The good doctor

Writer's block?

Date: 05/28/2000
From: SL4ever


It's too bad your poems don't inspire you creatively the way they inspire me. More than once I've been geeked up to write from your work.

For instance, the above. I love this poem. Beyond the obvious interpretation it can also be taken to mean less literal deaths. Way cool! :-)

Thank You TIGS!!

Date: 05/28/2000
From: MTwain


It was nice to see something unique, Sliders related and reallly goood on the boards ..... made it well worth the time to visit here!!

Keep writing these .... and E-mail the URL so I can read them and give some proper feedback replies!!!

Love this! What a wonderful thought inducing poem. Writer's block my butt! :-)

HUGG
MT
:-)

This isn't writer's block...

Date: 05/28/2000
From: dellyone


this is amazing. Keep it up.

dellyone

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